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Hey Man,
The flow and vocal effects are solid on this. Mixing is pretty good as well, I think more things could have been panned to leave the vocals sound a bit less cluttered.
It also could have used more ear candy as it felt very same-y throughout.
That said, the 808s pump, and the clap is pretty snappy.
Good job, 3.5 stars

Reeeally like the triumphant feel here. The brass lead is awesome. I also love the snares. Great job mate

Havent been here in a while and i can tel youve improved a lot! I really like the melody and piano. The synth was cool too. I really like that snare sound although it is too loud. Great job all around! Also did ypu buy Hive or get it free. If free, where?

TAGPilot101YT responds:

Lol just coming to this and I got it free the I can probably send a link...

Yeeeet

Nice mate choir is good

Progression is great, although it sounds a tad muddy and ends with a clip. Other than that fantastic!

I like the melodies and love the heaviness but ohmygosh is this way over distorted. I assume its clipping? and the white noise levels are too high. Negatives aside the progression is really nice and I think it has tons of potential.

TAGPilot101YT responds:

Thanks! But some of the white noise is intentional :)

I like all of the melodies and rythms but the treble cancels everything else out in the drop, its really all i can hear. Also the sidechaining is really weird, it sounds like you are using fruity limiter? I prefer volume automation, that way i can control exactly how the volume dips. The second build is really good. Also doe the bass are you just using s vinyl crackle sample?

Not bad for a first attempt, here are some suggestions: the intro with just the pad should only be 4-16 bars. Other elements like percussion or an instrument(s) would be a nice addition in keeping the energy and keeping it interesting. The vocals are good, i always put reverb on my vocals, you can experiment with that. The growls are good and very deathstep like, but the emptiness in the space after the snare doesnt really work. Also add background elements like a choir and pad and synths to keep the drop fresh. Good first attenpt all around, im glad i can inspire you so much!

TAGPilot101YT responds:

Thanks! for comment!

The melody and sound of the keys are super nice. The idea of the drops are great and the sound is very unique, I just feel like they should have a bit more impact. Also the track could be louder, thats just a simple mastering fix. Well Done

TAGPilot101YT responds:

Thanks so much I would like to do that but this took 7 hours to save as an .mp3 for some reason and thanks for the flp! :) Also since I only have the demo version of Fl studio 20 I cant open it again unless it was saved in the non demo version or if I buy FL which I cant afford.

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Purdue University

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